The Official Writing Challenge
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A beautiful walk through the lives of your characters; so many wonderful beginnings.
Wow. This evoked a lot of emotions for me. Nice.
Very vivid picture of a couple's beginnings and beginnings again. Nicely done.
04/28/09
A great picture of a life as a married couple
Very tender story with a great flow. I enjoyed the characters' journey.
04/29/09
I felt very fond of this family as I read this lovely story.
This brought tears to my eyes and was well written. Great job.
04/29/09
A very beautiful and realistic portrayal of the marriage journey. Good work!
This piece definitely fit the week's topic. The first part reminded me of me and my fiance and how we are going to be starting our lvies together. The end reminded me of the bitter truth that someday we will depart from each other here on this earth, but what a glorious reunion in Heaven it will be!

Good job with this one. :)
Truly moving and beautiful. Well done.