The Official Writing Challenge
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04/24/09
Quite a story here! I imagine you ran out of words, because there appears to be quite a bit more to this story than the word count will allow. You have a very interesting character in Jasmine. Thank you for sharing!
04/28/09
Definitely evokes emotion. I had a little trouble following it, but that could be me--I'm a medicine-head today.