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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 3 – Advanced)
Topic: Passport (07/25/05)

TITLE: Travel Pursuit
By Kathy Bruins
07/29/05


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The line looked long. What if I waited the many hours this would obviously take and they say no? How embarrassing and hurtful that would be.

The land holds so much promise. Excitement seared through me as I thought about the many adventures to experience that I have only read about. There is beauty beyond comparison in this place. There is no place on earth like it. I have a lover there waiting for me. Itís imperative that I get my passport to leave here!

The requirements for the passport I believe I have fulfilled. I have worked hard, given my money, and attended all the meetingsÖIíve been very sincere in my pursuit.

Have I done anything wrong? Thinking over the steps I have taken, I knew that I must have forgotten something, left something out, or did something incorrect. Itís in my nature to error. Iím feeling quite hopeless of getting my passport. I know they will find something. I should just forget about the whole thing.

Just as I decided to leave, a hand came upon my shoulder. I turned and saw my Lover. How could it be? He smiled at me with such radiance and said, ďDo not be afraid. I am the First and the Last. I am the Living One; I was dead, and behold I am alive for ever and ever! And I hold the keys of death and Hades.Ē (Rev. 1:17-18 NIV) Jesus is the only passport I need to exit this land and go into the Promised Land.


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Beth Muehlhausen08/02/05
Blessed relief!!! Jesus is our bridge to the Father. :-)
Nina Phillips08/02/05
I really liked the ending of your article.
Very well done! God bless ya, littlelight
Maxx .08/05/05
Hooray! Someone had the right passport! Glad you got in! lol! Nice writing.
Shari Armstrong 08/05/05
Very nice :)
Dixie Phillips 08/06/05
Very nice article! I enjoyed it!
Val Clark08/07/05
I'm cheering too 'cos your character got through! Good that you used a little 'l' for the first lover, so that you didn't give the end of the story away.