The Official Writing Challenge
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04/23/09
Wow. I did not see the end of this piece coming. Good work.
Wow! What a twist. Great work.
04/23/09
Wow, nice ending! This was very well done; I enjoyed it!
04/28/09
I really enjoyed reading the story. I did find the second paragraph confusing but got the point after reading it a few times. I love what you did with the 'no body/nobody' theme. Good work!
04/29/09
I'd love to see this developed!
I liked the foreshadowing of the twist to the story, and I really enjoyed the whole story.
Oh my goodness. That caught me completely off guard. Did not see that coming at all. Great job!
04/29/09
This could easily be a novel, and the title is perfect on several levels. Good work.
This was very well written-hooked me in right from the start...and made me want more! Good job.
You really caught me at the end. Well done. I would also like to see this further developed.