The Official Writing Challenge
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04/23/09
The pace of the nature walk is emphasized well by the pace of the writing here. Good descriptions.
04/23/09
The descriptions in this piece are like picture postcards, well-written snapshots of the scene.
Great description given. I felt like I was on the walk seeing what you characters saw. Nicely done.