The Official Writing Challenge
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04/23/09
Clever and well-written. I was intrigued by the beginning and enjoyed the twist at the end. Great job.
04/24/09
Well done. I would have liked to have see some of the repentance aspect on Jones part as per the original, but hey, what can one do in 750 words?
Clever up-dating and certainly suspenseful throughout.
04/27/09
I found this to be amazingly creative! The ending took me completely by surprise--very well done!
04/28/09
So, so, SO clever! Loved it!
At first I thought I was reading a Clive Cussler novel with the MC as Kurt Austin, then I "got" it; and so enjoyed the sneaky twist at the end. When that parachute came floating down from the sky, I had to smile - somethings you just can't get away from.
Greatly enjoyed this piece and the surprise twist at the end. Looks like you and I were on the same page with ideas this week, but yours had a lot more meaning to it which makes it better in my opinion. Good work. :)