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04/24/09
Very moving.
A very poignant story to illustrate beginning and end
04/27/09
Short ... powerful ... true. What else can I say?
04/27/09
I actually choked at the end. Very powerful and insightful telling of one life beginning and another ending.
04/27/09
Simply beautiful!
04/27/09
Any mother can attest to the fact that we do indeed have a loving communication with our children even before they're born! Thanks for this bittersweet story.
04/27/09
This was very difficult to read. Not because it was hard to read, but because of what it said, very well done.
04/27/09
This is beautiful, poignant, and very effective. That's the ultimate pro-life decision, and you portrayed it so movingly! Very well done.
I'm a little slow, but after reading again, got it. Good job with neat perspective.
Tender and heart wrenching. Well done.