The Official Writing Challenge
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04/23/09
very tenderly put.
04/23/09
Sweet story. I especially liked the last line.
04/26/09
Beautifully done. I guessed early on but I enjoyed the gentle way in which you revealed the narrator.
04/26/09
I appreciate the tenderness in the mc's voice. Even though it's not hard to figure out the ending, it didn't take away from the lovliness of the story.
04/28/09
What a wonderful story. And it is written so well. Not a word needs to be changed.
Gloria Graves
This is just beautiful. It reveals both the passing of time and our need to stay connected with our childhood. I love it.