The Official Writing Challenge
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04/20/09
Excellent portrayal of Delilah and her seduction of Samson! Your poem flowed well and your message at the end came through clearly! I enjoyed your piece very much! :)
You must have had fun bringing hot and cold Delilah to life in your verse. I had fun reading it. Poor Samson.
04/21/09
One of my favorite Bible stories, and you did a great job putting it in verse form. Very creative take on the topic.
This is *very* well done. You told the story with great meter and rhyme. Good detail, too.
04/22/09
This is very good writing.
I like it! Your re-telling of this story in poetic form is very well done.