The Official Writing Challenge
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04/16/09
The man is THE man, huh? Is that right? Cool story!
I too took it that the man she was talking to is the one she is going to marry, and she didn't realize it was him. The cold-blooded references are what lead me to believe this. Am I right? Though I don't know the first thing about horses, I learned a lot just by reading this. Very engaging and enjoyable to read.
Great ending, and intriguing story. I love a good romance, and this one is good!
04/17/09
A wonderfully romantic tale. Love the ending - I can't believe I didn't see it coming!
I loved your story. You kept us off-track by having your mc call him farm Boy. I'm a sucker for romance, and you did this one just right.
I love the way that this story read. Makes me hungry for more.
04/23/09
So many levels to ind on this one, very good.