The Official Writing Challenge
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04/16/09
Wonderfully done, and a great message.
04/20/09
Awesome structure and rhyme scheme, and a beautifully-rendered message, full of hope.
I loved the word pictures you painted here. It was a pleasure to read and reread. I gleaned more beauty each time.
I was wondering if your beautifully written poem is an analogy for the church?
04/22/09
It is so apparent when you walk into a church that has lost it's first love. So very sad...
Wow, this was well written and the descriptions are accurate indeed. Good job.
04/22/09
Wow...great imagery!
I too wonder if this poem represents the church. It definitely could represent both the church and a person. Either way, it is beautifully written with a great message.