The Official Writing Challenge
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I liked this story alot. It's one of my favorites so far for this topic. You should have wrote a harder drug though, because from my understanding it is physically impossible to overdose on marijuana.
04/19/09
Well done! You really had me aching with sympathy for this girl.

Try to avoid having so many sentences beginning with "Anna". Either begin some with an introductory clause, or use a pronoun.

I really like the pacing of this.
04/20/09
You captured the grittiness of the street in this piece. The action raced along with remarkable intensity.