The Official Writing Challenge
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04/16/09
Love it! Of course, Emma's line: "All I know is I follow Jesus, and He can decide the temperature Himself. In Heaven, I will be just right because I know Him." is the best.
04/18/09
I enjoyed this very creative use of hot and cold, as I fell in love with Aunt Emma.
04/20/09
Clever treatment of the topic and you do well with characters and dialog.
04/21/09
This is clever. It reminded me of trying to have a conversation with my teenager. Good job with the dialogue--you made Aunt Emma come alive.
04/21/09
I loved the humor of your story, and can relate to how hard English can be for a new comer. I might of choice a more Russian sounding name, but other than that I loved the story.