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Topic: Hot and Cold (04/09/09)
TITLE: Seaside Men Eww
By Rachel Rudd
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Boy, they look happy! Fathers are bouncing their small children on their shoulders. I can see some shiny bald spots amongst their lot. Mothers are smiling and fiddling with their gold necklaces. The singing of women is competing with the baaing of sheep and the braying of donkeys. It looks like the little boys are eating pancakes and of course the little girls are doing what they like best to do, swinging their braids.
Oh, my, what is that smell? Someone stinks! Must be them because it is hot out here! They sure could use a bath. Maybe they are planning on jumping into the sea for a swim.
No, I guess not. They stopped at the edge. I think Iíll get closer so I can hear them better.
It looks like they have some shade at the moment. Thatís good.
Wow, those people change temperament fast. They are screaming now like someone cut off their big toe! The children are hiding behind their mothers and the fathers are digging through their luggage. Looks like they are afraid. Chicken, anyone?
Beyond the crowd I see dust rising in the distance. I know what that means. The pounding of hooves and the crushing roll of wheels will soon be heard.
Being so close, I can hear their mumbling. What have you done to us? They ask.
The old man in the front with the long white beard and dusty robes raises his hand and smiles at them, but they continue their complaining. I bet theyíd like a grumble burger. Yeah, I can call it a grinder.
Excuse me for just a minute. I need to move around a bit.
There. Now they look a little more relaxed. Still, I think if they could theyíd be running for their lives. Too bad that sea is in the way.
Night is almost here. I bet they are afraid of the dark, too. Time to get to my job. I have the night light shift.
All ready! My light at least gives a little heat because someone must have turned down the thermostat. Itís freezing out here! It must be time for some ice scream. Oh, I hope not. They just settled down.
The old man is raising his hand againÖthis time heís got a long crooked stick in it. What is he up to?
Would you look at that? Thereís a path right in front of them.
They are actually walking into the sea! Maybe they wonít smell so bad then. I donít notice any water on their clothes, though.
That must be because the water is split in two. Maybe instead of a burger, they should have split-sea soup! Still that sounds a bit too wet.
I think Iíll just follow along after them.
They are singing again. Such happy peopleÖwhen everything is going right.
It sure is going to take them a long time for all those people and luggage to get over to the other side. They might have to use the whole night. Tomorrow they will probably be cooking up some hot cross bunions.
Behind me I hear the horses snorting and the wheels churning as the soldiers ride on. They donít seem to think anything of the miracle in front of them. HeheÖmaybe thatís because they canít see anything. I turned out the light behind me. Yeah, and now their wheels keep getting stuck. Boom! One down! Boom! Strike two! This is almost like bowlingÖ.yeah, a bowl of chair-ios!
The sun is starting to rise on the horizon. I guess itís time to turn out the light and provide some shade. The people have all crossed over. Time for the Egyptians to go for a swim?
Ahh, the sound of singing has begun again. Party time! I just hope they remember this day on all the hot days and cold nights ahead. I donít plan on leaving them. Thatís for sure. As sure as a cloud on a rainy day or a fire in a woodstove Iíll be there. Speaking of whichÖanybody got some fluffy marshmallows? I bet one could scorch some just right in this heat.
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