The Official Writing Challenge
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04/19/09
I love the rhyme throughout this piece. Clever title, and a neat take on the topic.
04/20/09
Charming and delightful.
04/20/09
Great take on the topic - so cute with a great ending. I'm not a poetry writer at all, but I did get a little lost at the rhythm change mid-way through. Maybe some line spacing would have helped (??!!??) - but I did pick it up and totally enjoyed the read.
04/21/09
I could see a kid's book--with cute little illustrations.

The meter seemed to change in parts, but it didn't detract from the fun story.

Very good job with the topic--lots of fun to read.
04/21/09
Delightful to read. Very good rhyming.
This reminded me of my dad and mom, because like the little girls one prefers warm and one prefers cold when it comes to the temperature of the house.

A very fun read. I really enjoyed it a lot. The lesson in it was very good.
Good job! Very creative rhyme.