The Official Writing Challenge
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04/19/09
I love the rhyme throughout this piece. Clever title, and a neat take on the topic.
04/20/09
Charming and delightful.
04/20/09
Great take on the topic - so cute with a great ending. I'm not a poetry writer at all, but I did get a little lost at the rhythm change mid-way through. Maybe some line spacing would have helped (??!!??) - but I did pick it up and totally enjoyed the read.
04/21/09
I could see a kid's book--with cute little illustrations.

The meter seemed to change in parts, but it didn't detract from the fun story.

Very good job with the topic--lots of fun to read.
04/21/09
Delightful to read. Very good rhyming.
04/21/09
This reminded me of my dad and mom, because like the little girls one prefers warm and one prefers cold when it comes to the temperature of the house.

A very fun read. I really enjoyed it a lot. The lesson in it was very good.
04/23/09
Good job! Very creative rhyme.