The Official Writing Challenge
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04/16/09
Love the title. Been there, done that, don't want to do it again! But, I enjoyed the trip back in time. Well done.
Ahhhhh for the memories. You described them well.
04/18/09
I can certainly relate. Oh boy...
04/19/09
Great title. Loved the vivid descriptions. Not looking forward to this. LOL
04/19/09
From a male perspective ... you may me "feel your pain".

Just downright delightful writing. I thoroughly enjoyed it, smiling at so many wonderful captures of the changing moments.
Men can be afflicted like that too - my ex-father in law refuses to use the heat and just about killed me this winter - San Diego's worst ever. 40 degrees in his house - you could see your breath and he said I needed iron!(Course he had pneumonia for three months...) This was fun to read! (Sorry not fun for you!)