The Official Writing Challenge
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04/18/09
This is beautiful, and masterfully crafted. Love the imagery and parallels. That last stanza especially is wonderful.
04/20/09
This is so very lovely and filled with wonderful, truths. Just today I sat staring at my backyard at green grass, trees and thought it was just a few days ago it was barren. Excellent writing.
Mona
04/21/09
Eloquent! I like the flow of the words and the "antiquated" feel in how you expressed yourself. You don't see this style as much anymore...seems most folks prefer "free-style." Beautifully written and heartfelt.
04/28/09
This is a beautifully crafted poem with a wonderful message. Thank you.