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Nice skit...with a wonderful reminder of the importance of having a passionate heart for God.
04/20/09
Nice portrayal of Bob and Marcia's hot and cold relationship! I enjoyed all the hot and cold mentions throughout your piece and especially appreciated the spiritual application. :)
04/21/09
Very creative how you carried the theme all the way through to the end of the story. I like how the couple is comfortable enough with each other to be totally honest about their feelings, even when their feelings are the best.
04/21/09
Whoops! I meant to say, "when their feelings aren't the best."