The Official Writing Challenge
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A great message delivered in an interesting way.
Good work here. I like the rhythm and clarity of your poem. The title drew me in, too.
Nice rhythm to the poem and a message that I especially needed to be reminded of today. Thanks.
What a sweet little story. Perry-boy's example is certainly one we can follow. I liked the way you applied the truths from the verse in your story.
Great reminder to appreciate all we've been given; very uplifting poem.
Since I don't live in Whiney-Oaks, all I can do is say how much I enjoyed the visit to your small town... but don't plan on me moving there!

Entertaining poem.
This was awesome! Simply awesome! I hope this one places high this week, because it was a delightful read!