The Official Writing Challenge
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A sad story ringing with authenticity. Such a tough place to be when you have to let go of someone you love in order to stay healthy.
04/21/09
Very well done piece. Thank you.
04/21/09
I like how you describe the personality of the friend as being hot and cold without actually using those words. Very creative.
Great title and good angle on this topic. Also, a very well written story.

I found myself wanting to know a little more meat about why they broke up (ie. what was said - maybe just a little dialogue would have added that to the story).

But you're talented without a doubt, and a good story teller!