The Official Writing Challenge
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04/16/09
Great lyrical feel to this wonderful poem. Well Done!
04/17/09
Beautifully written! I liked how I had to "hunt" for the hot and cold theme here. Very timely with Easter just a couple weeks past.
04/21/09
Very nicely crafted! Enjoyed this a lot!
04/23/09
Congratulations on your EC. Very beautiful.
04/23/09
This seems to be truly inspired, poetry straight from the heart. Well done and a well deserved recognition as an EC. Congratulations - Loren
04/23/09
Thanks so much for this beautiful and moving poem! Congratulations!!
04/23/09
CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR RICHLY DESERVED EC FOR THIS POWERFUL POEM!! Your words and message flowed beautifully! (In the 5th stanza, I don't think you need the apostrophe in the word "souls.") Great writing!! :)
04/23/09
What an encouraging, uplifting poem! Great job with imagery too. Congratulations on your placements this week!
04/28/09
Great flow, rhyme and meter with this lovely telling of the Passion/Easter story. Congratulations on placing top in your level with this one.
05/17/09
This ought to be transformed into a hymn.

Exquisite.