The Official Writing Challenge
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I love historical fiction, especially ties to Bible times. Nicely done!
04/17/09
An excellent and imaginative insight into the Lord's disappointment with the people of Laodicea. You certainly brought the town and its priorities to life
04/17/09
I'm with Bryan...I enjoy historical stories which are accurate in content. Your research on the story is impressive. I also like how you creatively inserted this week's theme into the story. Just one minor thought...some dialogue (even if it was with herself) might have upped the pace somewhat. Overall though, well done!