The Official Writing Challenge
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Deep. Very nicely done.
I enjoyed your mid-spring snow along with you, a very creative take on hot and cold
WONDERFUL alliteration, with all of those gorgeous "B" sounds! My favorite poem this week, by far!
Good job! This flows so nicely!
Winter in Texas was exactly like that this year! I loved your use of words, especially in the absolutely gorgeous last stanza. Well done.
You painted an accurate portrait of the unpredictability of nature, segue nicely into the comparison to the unpredictability of life.

The first two stanzas have a wonderful rhythm that begged me to read them out loud. I sense a transition in the stanzas that follow..not only in the meter but in the mood. I'm not enough of a poetry connoisseur to appreciate the technicalities, but I did feel the heart of your words. I was drawn to read to the end.