The Official Writing Challenge
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04/16/09
really love the rhythm of your poem. Had to read it a few times over to get the full sense of the story, but I'm not complaining!
04/17/09
certainly intriguing
04/20/09
Oh, how I love the "hot and cold" at the beginning and the steam at the end! Wonderful! Love the lilting rhythm of this, too.
04/22/09
Oo-la-la:)
04/22/09
so romantic!
the rhythm was almost like a heart beat
Well done!