The Official Writing Challenge
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04/09/09
You have a great message of faith in this (despite the circumstances). I liked your ending.
04/09/09
Great descriptions of a tough experience. So glad you can count on the Father to sustain you through those ups and downs. Good job!
04/10/09
Great devotional message in this entry. Well done!
04/10/09
This gives me a insight into you and what makes you tick. It's great to know you are holding your Father's hand.
04/11/09
I enjoyed reading your entry, and to share the poignant and personal lessons you have learned. Great analogies.
04/13/09
Very appropriate object lesson!

I'd have liked more of a "story-telling" feel to this--with some dialogue, perhaps, in addition to the description.

Lots of amusement park analogies this week, but I think yours is the only ferris wheel one I've read--very original!
04/14/09
I like the pace of your story and how you laid some ground work before getting into the truth you wanted to share. The comparisons of the ferris wheel to your life were well written.