The Official Writing Challenge
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04/09/09
Beautifully written. I wanted to sit with Dot and watch the sun rising and setting with her.
04/09/09
Very nice, indeed, and a great lesson. From start to finish, a day with Abba is a day well-spent.
04/09/09
This entry shows how to truly grow old with grace and dignity. Very nice writing.
04/10/09
I enjoyed the way you wove the 23rd Psalm into this story - giving it spiritual depth and insight. Every day spent with Abba is a great day.
The beauty of your MC's soul shines in this well crafted piece.
04/15/09
A lesson on how to live we could all learn from. Very well written, I walked thru her day, wanting to be able to relax and enjoy.
04/16/09
This is beautiful. Masterfully written. I love the way you use description and action to build your characters and plot. Wonderful.
Is this the same Dot from some of your other works?

This piece is a good example of how all of us should live - always thanking God and praising Him regardless of our circumstances.

I enjoyed this. Thanks for sharing, Marita. :)