The Official Writing Challenge
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04/11/09
You've used a challenging rhyme scheme. Wow! Such poetry. This is awesome…
"The rock of countless ages
Looked from heaven high above.
With the wisdom of the sages
Through his ocean-loads of love.
He paid the sinners’ wages.
In a surge of righteous wrath.
Tore open the vampire’s cages
Giving him to Satan’s path."

You are a master! Well done!