The Official Writing Challenge
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04/09/09
Creative and very well done.
04/09/09
Hilarious and oh so entertaining! Great poem-story.
04/09/09
Very clever. I like the way you rhymed the last word of each stanza.
04/10/09
This was a fun entry. I really wanted to buy some new strings for that sackbut player. Very well written and entertaining.
04/10/09
Loved this all the way through and the last stanza solidified my smile. Wonderful work!
04/10/09
I'm amazed at the creativity, as well as the beauty, of your poem. Just one question: Where in the world did you find that many words that end in "ation"?
04/11/09
Simply masterful. How do you do it?
Mona
04/12/09
I went back a second time and read the poem aloud. It is amazing and very unique. Love it!
04/12/09
What a brilliant approach to the topic...and the last stanza was perfection. Loved this!
04/13/09
Beth, this is one of my favorites of yours, since I love both music and sharp rhyme.

By the way, I don't mind "The" in titles like this...just in short titles like "The Sackbut".

This is just amazingly good!
04/14/09
Masterful writing here! I loved the story told in your flowing descriptive style! :)