The Official Writing Challenge
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04/10/09
Exceptional characterization and description. A wonderful job showing the MCs change in attitude. Curious exactly what happened down there, but I think that's part of your point. Love the hope at the end.
You showed very well the fear of the teen-ager. I was really glad she learned that God would go everywhere with her, even the most difficult places.
Excellent writing - great characterization and sense of struggle the mc is going through... in such a short amount of space, you created a very thought provoking piece... full of mystery, pain and healing... nicely done.
04/15/09
Wow! What an incredible tale you've woven in this story. I was hooked right from the beginning. You are an excellent story-teller! Well done.