The Official Writing Challenge
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A song. Yes! Congrats on getting the courage to submit a song/poem. This is just besautiful and it flows so artistically. You do have a way with descriptions and impact. I enjoyed reading this and wondered as I read it if it was indeed meant to be a song. I was happy to see your instructions for meter and tune. I write songs as well, and this is truly inspirational. Lord bless you and praise God that His son was lifted up so we may be be too.
04/09/09
Reading this poem/song around Easter just seems to fit so well. :) It is written well and it is wonderful the way you were able to get "the whole story" in. Thanks for sharing!
04/11/09
Very nice work on these song lyrics, beginning with your title. What a contrast.