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04/09/09
Great way to present the tragedy of Bipolar Disorder. Well done.
04/09/09
Present tense works well for this piece, drawing the reader into the uncertainty the young girls feel. Well written.
04/09/09
Well written example of the need for balance in our lives.
04/11/09
I think you did an excellent job.

I really felt this.
04/15/09
well written story. I felt sad for all the characters but sensed the hope in the end for all as well too.
04/15/09
Such a sad thing to have to endure. This was well-written, showing the ups and downs of this disorder.
04/15/09
Good description of Bipolar--and the effects of medication "For a while, there will be no bad days or good days, there will only be days. "

I like the pattern to this story--the contrasts and mirror images between the first 2 sections and the resolution that ties it all up.
04/15/09
Bipolar disorders are so complicated. I think you did a good job illustrating the ups and down of this disorder. I really like your last line.
04/16/09
so sad for kids when their parent can't be a parent

well written
04/16/09
Your voice is spot on, and this is a powerful approach to the topic. Well done.