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Yes, that's marriage as God intended. Thanks for the reflections.
04/14/09
I loved your title, and I enjoyed the gentle undulation of your story! :)
A good marriage, as you have depicted, has so many ups and downs. The joy comes, as you demonstrate, as you face them both together. You wrote a beautiful piece.
04/15/09
What a wonderful mood of peace in this tender story.
Like that. Simple but loving care of a spouse to his partner.
04/15/09
Sweet entry of what exists in a true marriage. Lovely thoughts.
Mona
04/15/09
This was just lovely...left me all mushy and warm! Well done!
This is very tender. I love the mood as well. Well done.
04/15/09
Nice job.
This made me smile. Well done.
Tender...Moving...Heartfelt...Nicely done.
04/16/09
Great use of a brevity of words, it was as if I could picture the whole scene. Loved the ending too.