The Official Writing Challenge
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04/09/09
those terrifying dreams~lived through too many of my own over the years! But praise to our God who rescues and redeems!

Your story has good descriptions. and speaks truth. how many of us are held captive my fear and lies? I love the last line. Rock on sister!!
Your story is well written...and I do so like it when the 'bad guy' receives consequences.
Oops! Me and computers often fail to understand each other. My former comment was intended for another writer. I have no idea what the computer did, but it did not follow instructions(I think....)

Your story is powerful. I like the couple standing in Faith together against the enemy. It also shows how unthinking adults can damage a child, and how the results linger for years on end. Inspiring piece.