The Official Writing Challenge
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04/10/09
I liked the dialogue of this story. The line "stoned already at 8 years old"...that was great. :) A bit confused as to where Roger was headed, but maybe that was the point with the yo-yo faith? Anyway, your description of air travel was right on. So much waiting....:)
04/14/09
Good story but not sure about the ending. I felt the minister was headed towards a ministry for AA, but then the redhead appears, so maybe not. And maybe I should take a clue from your title.
I enjoyed this story. I found it leaving me with wanting to know more about this man's future.
04/15/09
You had me at "Tampa". ;-)

I liked how the story started off light and grew more serious as you revealed more about Roger. I would have liked to have known more about him and how his conversation with Hattie impacted him (or not). Interesting title.