The Official Writing Challenge
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Very creative. Nicely done!
04/12/09
Fun POV.

It's probably just me, but this would have had more impact for me if Hazel's elevator companion had been an actual person who had somehow changed her life.

Your writing is creative and skillful, and I enjoyed reading this very much.
04/12/09
Lots of fun! Creative take on the topic that I enjoyed very much.
Love the POV.
04/13/09
Very creative POV, and a fun read. I want to know more about some of the characters on the elevator. Perhaps you'll bring them back for other stories?
04/14/09
I liked this fun story. At first I thought the MC was an elevator operator--but then I realized it was the actual elevator--very creative. This could certainly expand into several short pieces in the future.