The Official Writing Challenge
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This is a brilliant poem! You have described man's "down" condition of hopelessness and fear perfectly. No less perfect is the way you have described the "up" condition of sheer joy when God in mercy and grace "lifts me up on eagles' wings." This is a lovely, well written poem! You have taken a difficult topic and nailed it.
Wonderful poem expressing the "downs" of this world and God's uplifting Hand! Nicely Done!
Your poem is a beautifully written expression. I love how it ends on the hopeful "up" note while not ignoring the reality of the "down" of this world.
Oh I sooo enjoyed this poem! You are a great writer!
Excellent word choices in this poem that flows so smoothly! Flawlessly written!
Masterfully written--you took me with you on the "downs" and "ups" of life--and it's uplifting to know that God is always with us. Great work.
Beautiful, heartfelt poem. Congratulations on a well-deserved win.