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04/09/09
Manic depression is the epitome of ups and downs. Thanks for a look at it. Well done.
What impressed me most in this sadly realistic story was the mother's uncompromising love. You made the characters real by "showing."
04/09/09
I felt the struggle. Beautifully written.
04/09/09
I liked seeing this through the eyes of the sister....you really made their struggle come alive.
04/10/09
You have a gift for capturing the everyday moment. Your dialog felt right on.

Check those punctuation details.

Great piece done in a mighty up-to-date tone.
This really hit home since I have just have been through a manic episode with a friend of mine. You told your story very well, and umm...I like Bets. ;0)