The Official Writing Challenge
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04/10/09
Very good. Very creative link to the topic.
04/12/09
I like how you've written this in story form to illustrate the verse about building your house on the rock. Nice work.
04/14/09
This is one of my favorite Bible verses and I like how you carry it out in the theme of your story. Well written. I never thought about the wise man having compassion for the foolish man. Good point.