The Official Writing Challenge
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I could see this story being in a devotional book. Well Done!
Very well written! I sure enjoyed that!
04/14/09
"I screamed and the pig squealed." I liked the comparison. The entire story kept my interest throughout and I found myself chuckling on several occasions. You did a great job of bringing the theme - the ups and downs of life - into the story.