The Official Writing Challenge
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04/09/09
Excellent writing. Life does have the ups and downs of a roller coaster, and I especially love the prayer at the end.
Your analogies of the roller coaster illustrate excellently the ups and downs the Christian experiences. I, too, loved the ending prayer.
04/09/09
Wow, your example is very effective, and it takes masterful writing to pull it off in this way. Amen!
04/13/09
It's great to know we will end up on the hilltop of Jesus no matter the downs of life. I like the double entendre of the line "I thought I'd be left in mid-air as the car plummeted" as a metaphor for life's rollercoster ride.
Wonderful entry that I could definitely see in a devotional book reminding us all about life's up and downs.