The Official Writing Challenge
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Well written, surprise ending, nicely done!
04/12/09
Ah ha!! Very clever! In retrospect it all fits together, "which of us would be the most popular on any given day" and your other hints. :) I enjoyed this!
04/14/09
I enjoyed reading the story. Even though I knew the story wasn't going to have an obvious ending, it kept me intrigued because I didn't figure out what it was about until the secret was revealed at the end.
04/14/09
Very interesting! Who would have thought it was about an old carousel! :) You have a very descriptive style of writing, and I enjoyed your story!