The Official Writing Challenge
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03/19/09
Wow! What a story. Having lived some of those moments, I too needed to sit on His lap. Good job!
03/19/09
Living with Jesus is definitely living in the Kingdom of God. You made your point very clearly. Good job!
03/21/09
This is very well-written, but almost seemed like two stories in one. I was really interested in the first part, but then when the second part kicked in, I wished that the whole story was about that incident. Very well done!