The Official Writing Challenge
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03/20/09
How we in America take our Bibles and worship for granted! And, I hope this is a true story because it can encourage those who have accepted Christ, converting from other religions, some at a terrible price as with your MC.
03/20/09
Thank you for this wonderful story. Truly the ways of God are not channelled by humans. I praise Him for such brothers.
03/21/09
Great eye-opener.

Take a look at the number of sentences that begin with the MC's name. Try opening with other words or phrases, or with the pronoun 'he', for a greater variety.

We have much to be thankful for in the US!
How very thought provoking. Great work.