The Official Writing Challenge
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I like the different images you used for the Kingdom of God and the careful crafting of words to show them.
03/22/09
You conveyed the Kingdom with concise and well chosen words. Very well done.
03/23/09
A celebration of the gospel in its essence.

I enjoyed this string of poetic pearls.

I would love to see you write the entire gospel account in such a concise way.
03/24/09
Lovely and poignantly expressed images. Enjoyed this.
03/24/09
"A nation within nations
Passports stamped in blood
Contagious love
Full of grace and mercy"

My favorite part! What a message, powerfully delivered.
03/24/09
I like these--even though the style is spare, almost haiku-like, each is complete in itself, and perfectly titled.
03/24/09
I liked the way you looped around to the beginning again. It all comes down to Him coming down. :) Very good message written in a simple beautiful style!
03/24/09
Great imagery. "passports stamped in blood".
Loved this one very much.

Mona