The Official Writing Challenge
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This is BEAUTIFUL! Thank you.
Beautiful! I was moved to tears of joy.
This is a favorite for me this week with its precise rhythm, unusual rhyme scheme , and powerful words.
Very well constructed rhyme and rhythm with the essence of the Kingdom contained in these few words. Great work!
Just beautiful!! I especially LOVE the last stanza.
Exquisite and elegant in both rhyme and thought.

A delightful gem.
I've come back to read this many times. I just love it!
This was written like I wish I could write. If I were to give red ink, it would be only that this is too perfect. Excellent!
From foreigner to native son...just beautiful. Well written!
It was good to read your work again Kenn. (and if you're not Kenn, then you just got one the bestest compliments in the whole world.) Yep, really, really good. ; )
This is incredibly beautiful. My favorite line is: "Released from shades of gray." I've been in that place before, and I eagerly await the time when gray will be no more. Excellent writing.
Takes my breath is that beautiful! This is how I want to be able to write. Just so rich, rich.
Exquisite! Looking forward to that day and that place! So glad you joined in this week. What a blessing to read your writing again.
Absolutely beautiful! I loved the pace, the meter and I loved the words, so carefully chosen.
This is beautiful...I love the line "And none shall scoff in silent fear." As always, I enjoy reading your poems, Kenn!
Beautifully written word pictures that quicken my soul. You are a gifted poet, and this work is taking you to the places you spoke of on your main page. Thank you.
I forgot, "And follow fragrant wisps of prayer" is a beautiful thought.
Love your work--so glad to find you back in the weekly challenge. Beautifully written and such fluent flow to the whole piece. Thanks.
I love your poetry. You wouldn't believe if I said, every time I log into Faithwriters, I go read Lucinda Druell's story.

Thank you for being my inspiration.