The Official Writing Challenge
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03/19/09
I don't know much about poetry - but I thoroughly enjoyed this and was intrigued by the way the last words of the first and last sentence of each stanza rhymed. Beautiful sentiment - thanks!
I truly enjoyed your poem. It was beautifully written and I loved the First sentence and last in each stanza. They spoke volumes. Mildred Sheldon
03/21/09
Very interesting rhyme scheme! Kudos for finding a new way to structure a poem.