The Official Writing Challenge
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Very nice allegory--I enjoyed each revelation.
Oh, I liked this. The title and story remind me of a song. :) My Jesus makes all things new!
A marvellous parable
Congratulations on your 3rd place. Beautifully written.
Very sweet description of the Father's house...I loved the line "My father is always making things new"...just right. :) Congrats on the win!
I praise God that I got to read this heart warming story. Thank God for all your wonderful talent...
Paula, I'm delighted to "meet" you via the Theology forum, recently. I had to come and get better acquainted. This is a lovely story-dream---your title caught my attention! I checked out your website, too. How I wish I could figure out how to produce something as beautiful as you have done. I think yours is the loveliest I've ever seen. And, I agree with you about Charles Dickens' Christmas Carol. It is so full of wisdom it just tears out a person's heart. Oh to be able to write like that! Pleased to meet you! Are you on facebook, by any chance? Hugs.