The Official Writing Challenge
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I love the servant's heart of the caregiver and the "silent" voice of the patient. Your message is clear and wonderful.
03/22/09
Oh, this is marvelously done. Love Greta--and what excellent characterization of this woman in a coma. So creative.
Wonderful and moving piece. Loved the caregiver! Well done!
03/25/09
Ohh, I love this piece and the caregiver! Written from a love-filled heart. Outstanding! Intense! I felt like I was in the room. Truly an inspiration. Masterful writing.
Mona
03/25/09
You have revealed the plight of the coma patient. If only people would treat loved ones with this kind of love, whether they are in a coma or not. What a refreshing entry this is for my spirit.