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You pictured well with words a modernization of the parable of the rich man.
03/22/09
Love this modernization. I could picture this man so clearly, and the end was certainly a surprise. Great descriptions.
03/24/09
Excellent updated parable--I enjoyed this very much.
03/24/09
Great re-telling of this Bible story. Your dialogue and descriptive phrases are very good. Excellent job with the topic.
03/24/09
Wow! I agree that this re-telling is delightful to read, and yes, I'm glad for the happy ending, too. I pray many a rich man has also changed the ending in their own lives to this happy one. ( :
Great modern take on the biblical account! Very well done!
03/24/09
Well done! It was interesting to see this parable put into a modern light. Sometimes the words/stories Jesus spoke can seem too familiar. Thanks for making it real again!
03/24/09
Always working to put away childish things. Some lesons are tough. But, God's blessings and open arms to welcome us when we finally GET IT.
Good Story.

Mona
04/01/09
Laury,

I found this to be a most enjoyable read with a delightful, intriguing premise.

Well done.
I really liked your title and re-telling of this Biblical parable. I could feel the sunken heart of Daniel as he walked along lost and confused. Great story and an even greater lesson.