The Official Writing Challenge
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03/20/09
This is truly beautiful writing. I love the dialogue, revealing the wonderful love of husband and wife and how you showed it to be exemplary of heaven because of the truth and beauty present. Yet,there are deeper layers. You've left us with a mystery. Had the husband died in the accident?
03/21/09
Just beautiful descriptions and characterization. So much to this, that I doubt I've scratched the surface on.
03/24/09
I had no clue that the husband had already died in the accident until the end (is that correct, he had died, right?) Good writing!
04/20/09
I never thought about the possibiltiy of experiencing beauty in Heaven ahead of time so that we understand what is beautiful when we arrive on Earth. That idea was my favorite part of this beautifully written piece.